Monday, November 16, 2009

Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

The true beauty of a woman



Is not in the clothes she wears,



the figure that she carries,



or the way she combs her hair.



The true beauty of a woman



must be seen from in her eyes,



because that is the doorway to her heart,



the place where Love resides.



The true beauty of a woman



is not in a facial mole,



but true beauty in a woman



is graciously reflected in her soul.



The true beauty of a woman



It is the caring that she lovingly gives,



the passion in her Heart that she shows,



and the true beauty of a woman today



even in the passing years only grows.



The True beauty of a woman is from deep within



God made his children to be beautiful from the start,



but society has made us all blinded on the outside



for our inner eyes can only see that beauty is in the Heart...



I Peter 3:3-4



"Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as braided hair and the wearing of gold jewelry and fine clothes. Instead, it should be that of your inner self, the unfading beauty of a gentle and quiet spirit, which is of great worth in God's sight."



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

you know i read some, but aim telling you that i like it very much and i would like to copy this and put in my bed room on the wall if i my please keep the good work up



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

That's beautiful and deep. If only others could see it that way!



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

..beautiful



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

i love it, thats real talk more man need to be like you



i loved this



The true beauty of a woman



must be seen from in her eyes,



because that is the doorway to her heart,



the place where Love resides.



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

Oh my lord that is so beautiful you have so REAL talent, Have you ever considerd going public with your art.



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

deep, if only more guys thought that way



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

i think its good



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

It's good, but I would make some changes... Read below:



The true beauty of a woman



It is the caring she lovingly gives,



the passion she shows in her Heart,



and the true beauty of a woman today



even in the passing years only grows.



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

its excellent .very very wonderful.liked it alot.



Please any and all poetry lovers. I would like your opinion on my poem!?

I like it alot. It seems specific to one woman though, kinda closed off. I think you have more inside.



--Ture poets can never be in love. For love is a focus on one heart. When really poetry is to appeal to the heart of many.



---Swift 14 Mar 07

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